The Vow Excerpt
CHAPTER 1
Seriously, where were my parents? I heaved a sigh of frustration as I scooped up my overnight bags
for the third time and hoisted them over my shoulder. My phone calls went straight to voicemail, and my
text messages remained unanswered. Even my brother, JJ, hadn’t responded. My parents were
paradigms of punctuality, so overlooking their own daughter’s arrival at the airport seemed unlikely. An
explanation existed, but what could it be? I took one more glance around before heading back inside the
terminal and skimming over the many faces within the cell phone waiting lot. Not one of them belonged
to my parents. “Oh, to hell with it; I’ll take a cab,” I mumbled under a strained breath, trekking through
the airport doors and reclaiming my spot on the curb outside. I jetted up a hand, signaling for a cab.
With the raise of my hand, a taxi broke formation from the pack of yellow cars nearby and sped
over to me, scrubbing up against the curb and idling. The driver lowered the window. “Where to, Flower
Child?”
I glanced down at my cutoff shorts, lace crop top, and floral kimono, then stared at the middle-aged
man with salt-and-pepper hair, cocking my head. How had the cab driver known my dad’s nickname for
me? Truth be told, my closet was overflowing with flowy vintage pieces embellished with lace,
embroidery, or fringe, but a 60s hippy I was not. I constantly reminded my dad that the proper term for
the style was Boho Chic, but in his eyes, I was his Woodstock Flower Child—the one he’d forgotten to
pick up from the airport. “2863 Derrick Place,” I answered, opening the back door and tossing my bags
onto the seat. As I slid down against the upholstery and crossed my arms, the image of myself as a
pouting child flashed inside my head, but I wasn’t about to let my parents live this one down. One guilt
trip coming right up.
Twenty minutes later, the driver turned onto my parents’ street, slowing his speed. As my home
came into view on the right, he glanced in the rearview mirror at me with raised brows. “Here?” he
questioned, as if I’d given him the wrong address.
I didn’t speak, and barely managed a nod, fixated on the police cars, bright yellow crime tape, and
crisp white of the van decorating the front of my parent’s house like some bizarre Halloween scene
brought to life. I read the words Medical Examiner emblazoned across the van, blinked, and read them
again before blankly staring into space. Was this some sick joke?
“That’ll be twenty-five dollars,” the cab driver rattled off, ending my paralysis.
I fumbled with my wallet, flipping it open and paying him before slowly stepping out onto the
street. As I took a few steps closer toward my childhood home, a sickeningly cold feeling swept over me,
causing me to drop my bags on the pavement. A swarm of neighbors hovered close by, their eyes on me,
their faces painted with gloom. I shuddered at the sudden prickling along my flesh, as though hundreds
of ants were scurrying up my spine. I made it up onto the sidewalk somehow.
An officer, clad in dark-blue, hurried toward me, blocking my path. “That’s far enough, Miss. No one
is allowed inside.”
I stood my ground, not budging an inch. “That’s my parents’ house.” I didn’t wait for a reply, but
pushed past him instead. “I’m going in there.”
He grabbed my arm, stopping my progress. “I can’t allow that, Miss. This is an active crime scene.”
He released my arm. “Now please, stay back.”
A crime scene? I glanced at the words sprawled across the white van once more. Oh God. Mom?
Dad? JJ? The chill mushroomed, slithering into my pores and gnawing at my bones. The sun’s golden rays
reached down, drenching my body, but I couldn’t escape the fierce winter storm building momentum
beneath my flesh. Something was horribly wrong. I looked back at him, desperation creeping up my
throat. “What happened?”
His mouth tightened, forming a thin line. “I can’t discuss that with you at this time.”
“Then who can?”
“Right now, no one.”
What the hell had happened in our house? Had there been a murder? The word blinked on and off
behind my eyes, like a failing neon vacancy sign. I needed to get inside, and this fool was in my way.
“You’re telling me there isn’t a single person who can explain to me why I can’t enter my own home?”
He glanced at my bags, and then met my eyes. “You live here?”
I nodded my head, struggling to control the tremor in my voice. “I’m home for the summer.”
“College?”
“Yes. Finals are over.” I internally chastised myself. Why should he care about finals? My stomach
clenched, the knot of fear tightening. I peered over his shoulder. “Where’s my family?” I locked eyes with
him. “You need to let me go in.”
“Evidence is being collected. I’m afraid you’ll have to wait here.”
Like hell I will. A flurry of questions flew from my mouth. “Why is the medical examiner here? Did
someone die? Who? Are my parents and my brother okay?” My voice grew frantic. “What happened?”
He didn’t answer me. Instead, he turned toward the army of police officers scouring through trees
and bushes and called out, “Jenkins, find Detective Reynolds. Tell him I need him.”
Their search continued, no one taking notice of his request.
A pinched expression overtook his face as he shook his head. Focusing on me, he asked in a calm
manner, “What’s your name?”
“Claire, Claire Matthews.”
“Wait here, Miss Matthews.” He hesitated before moving away and disappearing into the mystery
beyond the front door some thirty feet away.
I stood alone, facing the house jam-packed with my memories of joy, and watched the front porch
become a revolving door for police officers wearing rubber gloves and blue booties over their shoes.
Some carried evidence bags, a few took notes, and others gathered around the doorway exchanging
dialog. A flood of tears blurred my vision. My fingers swept them away as I gathered my resolve. There
was no reason to cry. Not yet. Maybe robbers broke in while no one was home and turned on each
other. Maybe the neighbors heard the scuffle and called the police. My imagined theories slowed the
panic racing through my veins and softened the repetitive drum of my heartbeat, yet deep down, I
couldn’t shake the feeling something terrible filled the space behind the front door.
The officer reappeared inside the doorway, and standing next to him was a middle-aged man
dressed in a gray suit, with hair much blonder than mine. He plastered a solemn-TV-cop expression on
his face—the same one actors adopted when they delivered dreadful news. He ambled down the
walkway, narrowing the gap between us. My pulse flew into a wild sprint. Maybe, if I closed my eyes,
tapped my heels three times and said there’s no place like home, all of this would vanish. Sadly, I already
was home.
“Miss Matthews, I’m Detective Reynolds,” the new man said, extending his hand. His large palm
swallowed mine up, the heat of his flesh warming my icy fingers. “May I ask you a few questions?”
“Not until I’ve seen my family.”
“I understand this must be difficult, and the last thing you want to do is speak to a detective at this
time, but information helps me do my job.” His inquisitive eyes roamed over me. “How old are you?”
“I’m twenty…but listen, why can’t you just tell me what happened?” I begged more than asked.
He shoved his hands in his pockets, focusing on my bags. “In college?” Giving a nod toward the
house, he then asked, “Do you live here?”
“I go to school in San Francisco,” I answered, my voice on edge. “I’m home for summer break.”
“Were your parents expecting you?”
What kind of question was that? “Yes, of course.”
“When did you last speak to them?”
A wild impulse to blast past him and run straight into the house seized me, but I remained perfectly
still. “Please, just let me go inside.”
He regarded me with an air of authority. In a tone to match, he stated, “Miss Matthews, in order to
help your family, I need your cooperation. Please, answer my question.”
He wasn’t going to give up. If I wanted to gain entrance to the house, I had to play his game of
twenty questions. “A couple of days ago.”
“How did they sound? Did you notice anything peculiar about the conversation?”
Why the third degree, and what did he care about our topic of discussion? “They sounded fine.” I
paused, staring him down. They were my parents. If they had behaved strangely, or if I thought
something had been off about them, I would’ve done something—called somebody, or come home
early. Again, and with emphasis, I stated, “They were fine.”
He rubbed his chin, as if in thought. “What about background noise? Did you hear anything
unusual?”
Each question pinched a nerve, and I’d had enough. “I’m not answering another question until I
know what’s going on.” I took a deep breath. “Are my parents…dead?”
He put his hand on my shoulder, the somber-cop face returning. “I’m sorry, Miss Matthews. Yes, the
man and the woman inside the house are dead.”
His words came crashing down on me, threatening my strength to stand. I choked on my breath and
stumbled back a step. How could I survive without my parents? I looked away from him and focused on
the street. Tears spilled from my eyes, splashing against the hot asphalt and hissing out of existence. I
finally managed a couple of breaths, then a couple more, before finding my voice and looking up at him.
“Wh-What happened?"
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